felldain wrote:one flaw that ruined the last two complete images for me was the mouths of the characters (in the second one I'm talking about the guy on the right.) From a side profile it just wouldn't go that far back I'd recommend cutting it off at the point where the eye starts.
Unless they're meant to be mustaches ofc.
(Also the linear drawings look fantastic, before colouring.)
You're absolutely right. It's one of those things I don't notice at the time, then I'll notice it later or someone will point it out, and by that time it's too late.
Oh well, everyone at my school is either A) Dumb, B) Uncultured, C) Doesn't read the paper, or D) All of the above, so they won't even notice.