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Postby Raptorbane » Mon Jun 08, 2009 9:58 am

felldain wrote:one flaw that ruined the last two complete images for me was the mouths of the characters (in the second one I'm talking about the guy on the right.) From a side profile it just wouldn't go that far back I'd recommend cutting it off at the point where the eye starts.

Unless they're meant to be mustaches ofc.

(Also the linear drawings look fantastic, before colouring.)


You're absolutely right. :( It's one of those things I don't notice at the time, then I'll notice it later or someone will point it out, and by that time it's too late.

Oh well, everyone at my school is either A) Dumb, B) Uncultured, C) Doesn't read the paper, or D) All of the above, so they won't even notice.
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Postby kozom1234 » Mon Jun 08, 2009 11:19 am

I still like them :wink:

(oh, and the new sig is awesome :P )
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Postby Raptorbane » Mon Jun 08, 2009 12:10 pm

kozom1234 wrote:I still like them :wink:

(oh, and the new sig is awesome :P )


You have no idea how many different sigs I made before I was happy. ;_; I think I made 12 and scrapped them, and still had around 20+ ideas.

Drawing in thin horizontal spaces is difficult.

Edit: Plus I filtered the shat out of Raptor.
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Postby felldain » Fri Jun 26, 2009 4:51 am

Ichibi wrote:Hey what happened with your art? Will there be an update soon? :wink:


You can check my Deviant Art if you want, as you can see the stuff is a lot more different from my last.

And the latest imagery is derived from "lads mags", hence the naked women (the work isn't meant to be some sort of self-gratifying pornography, it's to do with the image of woman in a phallo-centric order, i've just covered one of the more obvious aspects of it).
Oh and by the way i was being sarcastic!
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