My 'very first comic'

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My 'very first comic'

Postby Krispian » Mon Feb 26, 2007 4:34 am

Hello Everyone,

I really like DL comics, they make me laugh. Espically the AFK make out one!

This is my first ever comic. I am not an artist or a cartoonist. I am just a normal guy who wanted to show something that happend to me (Krispian) and Dacorus (A Hunter) whilst in Un'goro.

The method I used to draw this comic was:
1. Think of ideas and write them down
2. Storyboard.
3. Sketch out ideas
4. Draw by hand using my favorite sketch pad.
5. Scan and save the files
6. By hand outline things.
7. Fill colours
8. Reduce the size of the images.
9. Add speech.
10. upload.


Is that a good or bad method? I am a newbie at the comic/drawing thing.


I respected from complete Arcane mage to Acrane+pyro, which gave me very powerful spells for little mana cost. Though I did get a bit ahead of myself and tried to kill King Mosh. (He is Mush in the comic). I have 3 more ideas for comics, if people like this.

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TO quote my hunter friend:
Yep - this just about sums up a brief adventure we had in un'goro a few weeks ago. Although I think in the cartoon the time before we died is shown longer than actual :p
Dac


Krom be nice :-).


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Re: My 'very first comic'

Postby Krom » Mon Feb 26, 2007 9:38 am

Krispian wrote:<stuff>

Krom be nice :-).


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I'm always nice, where does this misconception come from!!!
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Postby Jurn » Mon Feb 26, 2007 2:26 pm

they have problems keeping normal krom from comic krom
<3 we know your nice
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Postby Mijikai » Wed Feb 28, 2007 9:31 am

Jurn wrote:they have problems keeping normal krom from comic krom
<3 we know your nice


thats a lie
kroms a jerk
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Postby Krom » Wed Feb 28, 2007 11:11 am

Mijikai wrote:thats a lie
kroms a jerk

Screw you buddy!
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Postby Mijikai » Wed Feb 28, 2007 4:44 pm

Krom wrote:
Mijikai wrote:thats a lie
kroms a jerk

Screw you buddy!


SEE WHAT I MEAN? HES A JERK

tru stori
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Postby juklop » Wed Feb 28, 2007 5:04 pm

Mijikai wrote:
Krom wrote:
Mijikai wrote:thats a lie
kroms a jerk

Screw you buddy!


SEE WHAT I MEAN? HES A JERK

tru stori


Hmm, nope, don't see what you mean, Miji, sorry.
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Postby Zealia » Wed Feb 28, 2007 9:46 pm

he is a jerk!!!

2vs1 you better listen to me and miji :o
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Postby Krom » Thu Mar 01, 2007 10:55 am

Zealia wrote:he is a jerk!!!

2vs1 you better listen to me and miji :o

What did we tell you about being allowed to talk?

ie: Don't
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Postby Zealia » Thu Mar 01, 2007 12:54 pm

to talk it up and make fun of you? :?
coulda sworn thats what you said...
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Postby Jurn » Thu Mar 01, 2007 1:36 pm

Mijikai wrote:
Krom wrote:
Mijikai wrote:thats a lie
kroms a jerk

Screw you buddy!


SEE WHAT I MEAN? HES A JERK

tru stori


ok tru dat he might be a jerk
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Postby Krispian » Thu Mar 01, 2007 11:30 pm

What do you think of my comic?
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Postby Cass » Fri Mar 02, 2007 4:55 am

I like this comic. Reminds me of a certain mage alt. /cough
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Postby Krispian » Sat Mar 03, 2007 8:35 am

2nd Comic. I sometimes feel like this.

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Postby Tingles » Mon Apr 02, 2007 9:33 am

They're pretty OK, but I have some (mild) critique:

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spelling ;x

I find it very annoying to read comics that aren't written "properly", I can understand if a character uses leetspeak or is created with the intention to talk with improper grammar/spelling. Stuff like "conjour" (conjure), "firery" (fiery) :)

Also, it's King Mosh, not Mush

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Keep up the good work, maybe use a little less strong colors :)
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