Mah Stuff I did in Flash :D

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Mah Stuff I did in Flash :D

Postby Raptorbane » Mon Oct 13, 2008 1:26 pm

Old thread, Mah Stuffs, is getting kinda crowded with all my pictures. So, new one for stuff I've been putting together in Flash and Gimp.

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Just finished this one, and I finally realize what I suck at.
Shading.

There's mention of this one in my other thread too. It's just an icon for use on forums and whatnot.

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That's it so far.
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Postby Juonryu » Wed Oct 15, 2008 6:00 am

shading is used for showing the folds in here... maybe, id prefer traditional outlines. but the folds are very good =)
the black shade under the silver hair looks a bit... simple.
and i think the eyes are a bit "too high", and they are too far from the nose. the position of these eyes should be changed.

is this helpful? (my english sucks)
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Postby Raptorbane » Wed Oct 15, 2008 4:36 pm

Juonryu wrote:shading is used for showing the folds in here... maybe, id prefer traditional outlines. but the folds are very good =)
the black shade under the silver hair looks a bit... simple.
and i think the eyes are a bit "too high", and they are too far from the nose. the position of these eyes should be changed.

is this helpful? (my english sucks)


It's how I can say "It's not anime/manga, it's just a cheap ripoff turned into cartoon." :D


Edit: Here you go, the original lines.

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Postby Raptorbane » Sat May 30, 2009 1:12 am

THIS ART IS BAD AND I SHOULD FEEL BAD FOR POSTING IT. I AM GOING TO MAKE IT BETTER TODAY. HOW DOES THAT SOUND.


Edit: Gonna change it a little bit. Those glasses and hands are not staying where they are >:c What kind of crap music was I listening to when I drew this? This is screaming Savage Garden.

Edit 2: I already hate myself for my new idea for it. HOLY SEA OF ARMS, BATMAN.

Edit 3: Just a thought-note. What came over me when I decided I wanted to -color it in GIMP- after making the lines in Flash? I must have been real proud of my genius idea to use Flash for lines. "It automatically straightens them! YAAAEY" Oh wait I can do better in Photoshop anyway.

I hate myself right now D< *tabs back to PS*

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Postby TedTheBug » Sat May 30, 2009 8:03 am

Shoop da whoop!
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Postby Raptorbane » Sat May 30, 2009 8:47 am

TedTheBug wrote:Shoop da whoop!


:3

Also

Raptorbane wrote:
Juonryu wrote:shading is used for showing the folds in here... maybe, id prefer traditional outlines. but the folds are very good =)
the black shade under the silver hair looks a bit... simple.
and i think the eyes are a bit "too high", and they are too far from the nose. the position of these eyes should be changed.

is this helpful? (my english sucks)


It's how I can say "It's not anime/manga, it's just a cheap ripoff turned into cartoon." :D


Edit: Here you go, the original lines.
Picturelolololol


THIS IS A SILLY EXCUSE AND IF I USE IT AGAIN I WANT YOU TO HIT ME.
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